Friday, January 28, 2011

Alternate Ending

The Penguin Publishing House has  received several pleads asking for a more pleasant ending. The publishing house has decided to re-create the ending for "The Birthmark" and has hired you to do it!

Assignment:
For this asisgnment you are to re-write the ending of the story. Be creative and write an alternate ending for Aylmer, Georgiana, and Aminadad.
       - You have the liberty to add as many details as you wish.
       - Remember though, the ending must follow the plot of the story.

15 comments:

  1. Georgiana's birthmark had stayed the same. And with having yet another failure, Aylmer snapped.
    He had begun to wreck his lab, crazed, Aylmer had ran off. No one has heard of him ever since, and Georgiana was able to marry Aminadad :O ~Dannelys

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  3. Georgiana refuses to take the potion and she goes balistic on Aylmer. She leaves him and goes to Aminadad, they get married. Aminadad kisses her birthmark and everything turned suddenly good.

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  4. - NO WAYYY, THIS IS VERY BORING :p

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  5. <3 I LOVE MY MOMMYY

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  6. georgiana refuses to take the postion.she decides o slip it into aylmers tea every night, she tries to be sneaky with it. aminodab helps her out. aylmer feels weak after a cuple of days.
    aylmer starts to get sick, and gets worse as the days pass.gorgiana keeps on with her plot. aylmer sees her pouring it into his tea. he tries to stop her, by trying to stab her. but aminodab kills aylmer. georgiana ends up marying aminodab. and they know you cant perfect what is not perfect

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  7. I Lovee Paris Hilton =] xD .........

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  8. Georgiana doesnt die and her birthmark is gone but Alymer dies and she is Amnidads new wife, a twisted ending :D - Andy

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  9. Georgiana refuses to take the potion and she goes balistic on Aylmer. She leaves him and goes to Aminadad, they get married. Aminadad kisses her birthmark and everything turned suddenly good.
    Than Aylmer regrets everything that he put her through and he wishes to get her back. One day in the labratory Aylmer spilled a chemical on his face and the next day there was a big birthmark on his right cheek in a shape of a foot. Now he knew how Georgiana felt like.

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  10. when gorgiana dies everything turns black and you see chuck norris being expirimented on and they went in to his dreams back in time to see his ancecter witch happens to be gorgiana.then he wakes up and roundhouse kicks all the doctors expirimenting on him. and jumps out the window and steal someones monster also roundhouse kicks them rips his shirt off and runs into the sunset-ALEXIS

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  11. as the days pass georgiana starts to notice that the brth mark is slowly fading away. At first she seems thrilled to get rid of the birth mark. But day by day aylmer started to be become very ill. But even though it was looking good for georgiana, the future doesnt seem bright for aylmer as the life slowly starts to fade from him. so aylmer dies and georgiana leaves.

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  12. Mike Greene

    Aylmer had finally completed his potion. He rushed to Georgiana so he can recieve his perfect wife. He walked in the room and saw a big surprise. As he walked in he saw Georgiana and Aminidad kissing. He dropped to his knees ,and then passed out.
    The bottle that contained the potion fell out of his hands and shattered. The contents made a puddle underneath Aylmers head. Once Aylmer regained conciousnous he had realized that the potion had reached his face. He then raced to the glass in his room,and stared in the mirror.
    Georgiana and Aminidad were also staring at his and couldn't believe what they saw. Aylmer was handsome and Georgiana then started begging for him to take her back. He refused to and kick both of them out his house. Aminidad and Georgiana were never happy with each other,and never made it to the end of the week

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  13. Georgiana was thinking about ayler and the fact the he didn't like her birthmark she was thinking so she told ayler the she was living him.

    so she married a cute guy and she was happy and he love her birthmark.

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  14. Georgiana's birthmark had stayed the same. And with having yet another failure, Aylmer snapped.
    He had begun to wreck his lab, crazed, Aylmer had ran off. After leaving the village in exile he started a new life somewhere far away deep in the an uncharted desert land.

    Aminadad had stayed at Georgianas side and nursed her back to health. Once she was back to normal Aminadad confessed his love to her and asked for her hand in marriage. She accepted his offer and lived happily ever after.

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  15. PART 2:
    Georgiana and Aminadad were later gifted with 7 beautiful children. All of their kin were blesssed with their mothers beauty including birthmarks. Each had a diffirent symbol in diffirent parts of their body. The next generation were shaggy like Aminadad. Their bloodline continued in this cycle, yet all offsprings and all generations lived happily with the application of Georgiana's hardship.
    ~dannelys

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